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Friday, July 26, 2013

Introduction

민사고My name is Yul. I am going to talk about three things that are true about me. These are uniqhue to me: chess, Jeju, and Apple. My favorite board game is chess. I like playing this game because every pieces have different roles. I enjoy playing with black pieces because since the white stats first, I can analyze white's movements and make strategies. Jeju is my favorite island. I especially like oranges harvested from Jeju because they are sweet. Also weather in Jeju is really warm  so I like swimming in Jeju. Landscape in Jeju is beautiful too. Finally, Apple is my favorite IT company. I use an iPod, electronic device manufactured by Apple. IOS7 (Apple's management system)  is coming out soon. Once IOS7 comes out I will probably use my iPod everyday.       Thank you for reading my introduction.
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  1. UnknownJuly 31, 2013 at 5:06 AM

    Hi Yul Choi,

    It is nice to meet you. I enjoyed reading three things about you. When you are writing you need to organize your thoughts into paragraphs. The first paragraph introduces the topic, then in a new paragraph explain chess so each of your three things is a separate paragraph. Then end with a conclusion summarizing what you have said. Try to do this next time.

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  3. UnknownAugust 2, 2013 at 7:11 PM

    Hello!

    It is good to be in the same class with you. And I wish our class could get closer than now.

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