Yul Choi
August, 5th, 2013
Dear Government of Korea,
I'm writing this letter because I believe computer games
have bad influences on Korean teenagers, especially students.
I strongly believe that the Korean government should ban computer
games and Korean students shouldn't play computer games.
Many experts like Dr. Donny , for example agree with me.
I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.


at games. Especially some students spend money in games because
of their competitiveness; to beat other people in games.
The final reason is because computer games make it hard for
students to focus in school when students play computer games.
It is now known that students will think a lot about computer games and
not concentrate on school. Also some violent computer games cause
behavioral disorders to students.
As you can see, computer games have bad influence to students.
Based on my argument, I hope you will consider my point of view
as reasonable and try to ban computer games from students.
Thank You.
Sincerely, Yul Choi
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. Internet addiction is a serious problem
DeleteThis is a good persuasive argument. Good job using research to support your reasons. I was wondering how often you play computer games.
ReplyDelete